All questions are from Task 2 and you should look at our Task 1 page for help with that. Do you need me to correct your essays and give you feedback on them? Check out our essay correction service. Criminal Justice Some people that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime.
Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Some people believe that capital punishment should never be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes.
Discuss both views and give your opinion. Some people believe the purpose of prison is to punish, while other would argue that rehabilitation is its primary role. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Some people feel unsafe when they are in public and at home. Some people say that excessive noise should be a criminal offence, while others say they should be free to make noise without limitation.
Health Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
In some countries levels of health and fitness are decreasing and average weights are increasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what are some possible solutions? Research indicates that the characteristic we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any other experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence? Do you agree or disagree? More and more schools allow fast food restaurant to sell their products to their students.
Is it a positive or a negative development? Some people believe that studying history is very important and we must study the past to understand the present.
Others say that it is useless and should not be studied at all. Others, however, support and reward students that show the most improvement. With the technology available today there is no justification for it, and everything should be done online. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Keep reading then, because we are just about to analyse a Band 6.
Hold mouse over highlighted words or tap on mobile to see the comments, suggestions and corrections. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. To many people, it is appropriate to marry for money rather than love.
However, I believe that both love and money should be bouncetogether in any marriages. Certainly, money is an important part in our lives [TS]. However, love should be the root of any marriages [TS]. Firstly, it is because love is such a glue to connect two persons which have their own lives, become one NC. Moreover, love makes people growing up because they do not only have responsibility to themselves, but also to their partners as well.
That is why marrying with love is always encouraged. In my opinion, I think that both love and money is both necessary [TS].
Marriage relying on money would be rapidly disintegrated when unfortunately the money is run out. Therefore, love and money should stand together in marriage even though their contribution could be unbalanced NC. As we have seen, marriage without either money or love would come to an unhappy ending. So I believe that they both have their own contribution to a merry family. Task Response Analysis: This essay follows the task requirements quite well.
The opinion is clear. The paragraph on money is not very well developed and not entirely clear. Approximate score for Task Response: Band 7. Coherence is concerned with the effectiveness of what the essay is trying to communicate.
The essay is well structured — each paragraph announces its topic clearly [TS] and the introduction announces the opinion of the writer. Sometimes the ideas are not entirely clear inside the paragraphs see NC. Also the writer has a tendency to be repetitive.
Approximate score for Coherence and Cohesion: Band 7. Lexical Resource Analysis: The use of vocabulary seems quite reasonable but attempts to use a wider range are not always successful see corrections above. Probably not quite good enough for a 7. Approximate score for Lexical Resource: Band 6 or 6. However, I believe that both love and money should be bounce together in any marriages. Certainly, money is an important part in our lives.
It is hard for any persons to accept a partner which does not have money or at least a job to take care of future family. However, love should be the root of any marriages. Firstly, it is because love is such a glue to connect two persons which have their own lives, become one.
In my opinion, I think that both love and money is both necessary. In contrary, marriage relying on love would sometimes come to end when they could not earn money to carry out family, such as paying bills, buying food, etc.
Therefore, love and money should stand together in marriage even though their contribution could be unbalanced. Grammatical Range and Accuracy Analysis: Although the essay is quite easy to follow, it has too many grammatical errors in too many sentences to merit a 7 score see corrections highlighted above.
It is hard for any persons to accept a partner who does not have money or at least a job to take care of their future family. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes. So I believe that they both have their own contribution to a merry family. Approximate score for Coherence and Cohesion: Band 7. More and more schools allow fast food restaurant to sell their products to their students.
The range of grammatical constructions used seems quite good. Certainly, money plays an important part in our lives. It is hard for any persons to accept a partner who does not have money or at least a job to take care of their future family.